User contributions for 31.54.59.160

27 September 2015

• 07:3707:37, 27 September 2015 diff hist −6‎ Salad Fingers ‎ →‎Episode 10 – Birthday: grammar: there is no "it" for him to scold
• 07:0207:02, 27 September 2015 diff hist +152‎ Talk:Bill Cosby ‎ →‎Bill Cosby is an accused Serial Rapist.: "Alleged" is another option.
• 07:0107:01, 27 September 2015 diff hist +3‎ Goal seeking ‎ →‎Examples: grammar
• 04:3304:33, 27 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ General counsel ‎ comma reqd
• 01:0401:04, 27 September 2015 diff hist +8‎ Frontierland, Morecambe ‎ →‎Brief history: {{who}} and grammar
• 01:0301:03, 27 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Frontierland, Morecambe ‎ comma
• 00:5600:56, 27 September 2015 diff hist +357‎ Indiana Jones and the Fate of Atlantis ‎ ==8-bit versions== A game called ''Indiana Jones and the Fate of Atlantis'' was released around the same time for 8-bit home computers including the ZX Spectrum, Amstrad CPC, and Commodore 64 home computers. Due to machine limitations, this wa
• 00:0900:09, 27 September 2015 diff hist −20‎ Bill Cosby sexual assault cases ‎ →‎Institutions sever ties: grammar seems wrong
• 00:0600:06, 27 September 2015 diff hist +94‎ Talk:Bill Cosby ‎ →‎Bill Cosby is an accused Serial Rapist.: In addition it could be misread as "he is a serial rapist who has been accused", i.e. proven.
• 00:0500:05, 27 September 2015 diff hist +266‎ Talk:Bill Cosby ‎ →‎Bill Cosby is an accused Serial Rapist.: Putting "accused serial rapist" in the first sentence seems a bit harsh if "he has denied the allegations and has never been criminally charged".

26 September 2015

• 22:4422:44, 26 September 2015 diff hist −1‎ Shelf corporation ‎ bad comma

24 September 2015

• 01:4501:45, 24 September 2015 diff hist +180‎ Talk:Benjanun Sriduangkaew ‎ →‎What is her real name?: new section

23 September 2015

• 22:5622:56, 23 September 2015 diff hist −2‎ Prahlad Jani ‎ →‎Investigations: grammar
• 21:3221:32, 23 September 2015 diff hist −4‎ Windows Search ‎ →‎Architecture: grammar: a number IS, not ARE
• 20:2220:22, 23 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Face the Ace ‎ comma
• 20:1520:15, 23 September 2015 diff hist −1‎ Ball clay ‎ bad comma
• 18:1618:16, 23 September 2015 diff hist −4‎ Lost Girl ‎ needless italics
• 15:3015:30, 23 September 2015 diff hist −4‎ We Need Answers ‎ grammar

21 September 2015

• 22:3922:39, 21 September 2015 diff hist +3‎ Charles Martinet ‎ grammar
• 22:2722:27, 21 September 2015 diff hist −1‎ Kwirk ‎ →‎Legacy: say "spin-off", not "gaiden" - word not widely understood or recognised as English
• 22:2022:20, 21 September 2015 diff hist 0‎ Goomba ‎ "two dimensional games" means "two games that are dimensional". hyphens matter!
• 22:1922:19, 21 September 2015 diff hist +2‎ Eggerland ‎ →‎Main characters: grammar etc.
• 22:1822:18, 21 September 2015 diff hist −38‎ Eggerland ‎ grammar etc.
• 22:1622:16, 21 September 2015 diff hist −5‎ One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest (novel) ‎ "tamp down" suggests reinforcing something, not weakening it
• 18:3418:34, 21 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Are You Dave Gorman? ‎ →‎Evolution: tense
• 17:3817:38, 21 September 2015 diff hist +4‎ Cat Stevens ‎ grammar: we can't say "in 1977 he did xyz the following year", since the following year is no longer 1977
• 17:3117:31, 21 September 2015 diff hist −1‎ Betty Holberton ‎ bad hyphen

20 September 2015

• 23:3223:32, 20 September 2015 diff hist +2‎ One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest (novel) ‎ grammar: dangling participle

19 September 2015

• 06:0406:04, 19 September 2015 diff hist −1‎ Elaeagnus umbellata ‎ bad comma
• 04:5804:58, 19 September 2015 diff hist −6‎ Katamari Damacy ‎ →‎Gameplay: tense

16 September 2015

• 17:1717:17, 16 September 2015 diff hist +8‎ Chris Oyakhilome ‎ →‎Criticism: "alleged miracles" not miracles
• 17:1717:17, 16 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Chris Oyakhilome ‎ comma reqd

11 September 2015

• 01:2901:29, 11 September 2015 diff hist −2‎ Honorary whites ‎ →‎Japanese: grammar
• 01:2801:28, 11 September 2015 diff hist −4‎ Frankenstein complex ‎ bad "the"
• 01:2701:27, 11 September 2015 diff hist −15‎ Malpighian layer ‎ nope... a layer is not a term. "layer" is a term.
• 01:2701:27, 11 September 2015 diff hist −32‎ Enhanced podcast ‎ nope...
• 01:2701:27, 11 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Legacy debt ‎ grammar: difference between x AND y
• 01:2601:26, 11 September 2015 diff hist −9‎ Legacy debt ‎No edit summary
• 01:1101:11, 11 September 2015 diff hist −29‎ Greenham Common Women's Peace Camp ‎ →‎Importance of Gender: fix caps. and it's a question, not a statement, so you can't "state" it
• 01:0901:09, 11 September 2015 diff hist 0‎ Greenham Common Women's Peace Camp ‎No edit summary

10 September 2015

• 21:0421:04, 10 September 2015 diff hist −11‎ Rabbit (telecommunications) ‎ clearer

9 September 2015

• 21:1221:12, 9 September 2015 diff hist −4‎ Stilyagi (film) ‎No edit summary
• 20:0620:06, 9 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ A. S. Byatt ‎ →‎Biography: style
• 19:1219:12, 9 September 2015 diff hist +334‎ Talk:Gaydar ‎ →‎Grammar problem / meaningless sentence: new section
• 18:5318:53, 9 September 2015 diff hist −1‎ Masaki Sumitani ‎ bad comma
• 18:1818:18, 9 September 2015 diff hist 0‎ Lapis (text editor) ‎ caps
• 18:1718:17, 9 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Simultaneous editing ‎ typo
• 18:1718:17, 9 September 2015 diff hist −25‎ Sublime Text ‎ caps, redundant link

8 September 2015

• 16:5116:51, 8 September 2015 diff hist −3‎ Paul Hollywood ‎ grammar
• 00:3600:36, 8 September 2015 diff hist −3‎ Oink's Pink Palace ‎ bad comma