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27 September 2015
- 07:3707:37, 27 September 2015 diff hist −6 Salad Fingers →Episode 10 – Birthday: grammar: there is no "it" for him to scold
- 07:0207:02, 27 September 2015 diff hist +152 Talk:Bill Cosby →Bill Cosby is an accused Serial Rapist.: "Alleged" is another option.
- 07:0107:01, 27 September 2015 diff hist +3 Goal seeking →Examples: grammar
- 04:3304:33, 27 September 2015 diff hist +1 General counsel comma reqd
- 01:0401:04, 27 September 2015 diff hist +8 Frontierland, Morecambe →Brief history: {{who}} and grammar
- 01:0301:03, 27 September 2015 diff hist +1 Frontierland, Morecambe comma
- 00:5600:56, 27 September 2015 diff hist +357 Indiana Jones and the Fate of Atlantis ==8-bit versions== A game called ''Indiana Jones and the Fate of Atlantis'' was released around the same time for 8-bit home computers including the ZX Spectrum, Amstrad CPC, and Commodore 64 home computers. Due to machine limitations, this wa
- 00:0900:09, 27 September 2015 diff hist −20 Bill Cosby sexual assault cases →Institutions sever ties: grammar seems wrong
- 00:0600:06, 27 September 2015 diff hist +94 Talk:Bill Cosby →Bill Cosby is an accused Serial Rapist.: In addition it could be misread as "he is a serial rapist who has been accused", i.e. proven.
- 00:0500:05, 27 September 2015 diff hist +266 Talk:Bill Cosby →Bill Cosby is an accused Serial Rapist.: Putting "accused serial rapist" in the first sentence seems a bit harsh if "he has denied the allegations and has never been criminally charged".
26 September 2015
- 22:4422:44, 26 September 2015 diff hist −1 Shelf corporation bad comma
24 September 2015
- 01:4501:45, 24 September 2015 diff hist +180 Talk:Benjanun Sriduangkaew →What is her real name?: new section
23 September 2015
- 22:5622:56, 23 September 2015 diff hist −2 Prahlad Jani →Investigations: grammar
- 21:3221:32, 23 September 2015 diff hist −4 Windows Search →Architecture: grammar: a number IS, not ARE
- 20:2220:22, 23 September 2015 diff hist +1 Face the Ace comma
- 20:1520:15, 23 September 2015 diff hist −1 Ball clay bad comma
- 18:1618:16, 23 September 2015 diff hist −4 Lost Girl needless italics
- 15:3015:30, 23 September 2015 diff hist −4 We Need Answers grammar
21 September 2015
- 22:3922:39, 21 September 2015 diff hist +3 Charles Martinet grammar
- 22:2722:27, 21 September 2015 diff hist −1 Kwirk →Legacy: say "spin-off", not "gaiden" - word not widely understood or recognised as English
- 22:2022:20, 21 September 2015 diff hist 0 Goomba "two dimensional games" means "two games that are dimensional". hyphens matter!
- 22:1922:19, 21 September 2015 diff hist +2 Eggerland →Main characters: grammar etc.
- 22:1822:18, 21 September 2015 diff hist −38 Eggerland grammar etc.
- 22:1622:16, 21 September 2015 diff hist −5 One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest (novel) "tamp down" suggests reinforcing something, not weakening it
- 18:3418:34, 21 September 2015 diff hist +1 Are You Dave Gorman? →Evolution: tense
- 17:3817:38, 21 September 2015 diff hist +4 Cat Stevens grammar: we can't say "in 1977 he did xyz the following year", since the following year is no longer 1977
- 17:3117:31, 21 September 2015 diff hist −1 Betty Holberton bad hyphen
20 September 2015
- 23:3223:32, 20 September 2015 diff hist +2 One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest (novel) grammar: dangling participle
19 September 2015
- 06:0406:04, 19 September 2015 diff hist −1 Elaeagnus umbellata bad comma
- 04:5804:58, 19 September 2015 diff hist −6 Katamari Damacy →Gameplay: tense
16 September 2015
- 17:1717:17, 16 September 2015 diff hist +8 Chris Oyakhilome →Criticism: "alleged miracles" not miracles
- 17:1717:17, 16 September 2015 diff hist +1 Chris Oyakhilome comma reqd
11 September 2015
- 01:2901:29, 11 September 2015 diff hist −2 Honorary whites →Japanese: grammar
- 01:2801:28, 11 September 2015 diff hist −4 Frankenstein complex bad "the"
- 01:2701:27, 11 September 2015 diff hist −15 Malpighian layer nope... a layer is not a term. "layer" is a term.
- 01:2701:27, 11 September 2015 diff hist −32 Enhanced podcast nope...
- 01:2701:27, 11 September 2015 diff hist +1 Legacy debt grammar: difference between x AND y
- 01:2601:26, 11 September 2015 diff hist −9 Legacy debt No edit summary
- 01:1101:11, 11 September 2015 diff hist −29 Greenham Common Women's Peace Camp →Importance of Gender: fix caps. and it's a question, not a statement, so you can't "state" it
- 01:0901:09, 11 September 2015 diff hist 0 Greenham Common Women's Peace Camp No edit summary
10 September 2015
- 21:0421:04, 10 September 2015 diff hist −11 Rabbit (telecommunications) clearer
9 September 2015
- 21:1221:12, 9 September 2015 diff hist −4 Stilyagi (film) No edit summary
- 20:0620:06, 9 September 2015 diff hist +1 A. S. Byatt →Biography: style
- 19:1219:12, 9 September 2015 diff hist +334 Talk:Gaydar →Grammar problem / meaningless sentence: new section
- 18:5318:53, 9 September 2015 diff hist −1 Masaki Sumitani bad comma
- 18:1818:18, 9 September 2015 diff hist 0 Lapis (text editor) caps
- 18:1718:17, 9 September 2015 diff hist +1 Simultaneous editing typo
- 18:1718:17, 9 September 2015 diff hist −25 Sublime Text caps, redundant link
8 September 2015
- 16:5116:51, 8 September 2015 diff hist −3 Paul Hollywood grammar
- 00:3600:36, 8 September 2015 diff hist −3 Oink's Pink Palace bad comma