User contributions for Jcejhay
A user with 3,640 edits. Account created on 28 April 2013.
17 July 2024
- 19:1319:13, 17 July 2024 diff hist −4 Roderick Alleyn →The 33 Alleyn novels: Why use a section title that's too narrow for some of what's comprised in the section? current
- 19:1219:12, 17 July 2024 diff hist +81 Roderick Alleyn →The 33 Alleyn novels: Update.
14 July 2024
- 22:5722:57, 14 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Tame Impala →Musical style: Grammar. current
12 July 2024
- 17:1717:17, 12 July 2024 diff hist +728 User talk:Duffbeerforme →Azalia Snail: new section Tag: New topic
- 17:0817:08, 12 July 2024 diff hist +16 m Azalia Snail →Early life and influences: Italics for album titles. current
6 July 2024
- 11:2611:26, 6 July 2024 diff hist −16 Ina Balin →Humanitarian activities: Changed section heading, since what's actually described is a mixture of humanitarian work, military-morale work, adoption, and autobiographical filmmaking. current
5 July 2024
- 23:5923:59, 5 July 2024 diff hist +6 Eurythmy →In popular culture: No reason to display the spelling that doesn't correspond to the linked article. Italics and wikilink for publication; and it was a clarification, not the original article, that provided the correction (as seen in footnoted source). current
2 July 2024
- 18:5318:53, 2 July 2024 diff hist −26 Lola Falana →Career: Revised to avoid problematic term. (N.B. There's a Wikipedia article for "showgirl," but the definition there doesn't seem to pertain to TV performers.) Removed unnecessary language, including off-tone "acclaimed" for figure with own article. current
30 June 2024
- 17:3417:34, 30 June 2024 diff hist +2 Jaclyn Smith →top: Revised "best remembered" to "most notable."
- 17:3317:33, 30 June 2024 diff hist −59 Jaclyn Smith →Early career: Removed unsourced, possibly contentious assertion about living subject's audition. Citation needed for audition itself.
- 17:3117:31, 30 June 2024 diff hist −10 Jaclyn Smith →Early career: Removed unnecessary explanation of who Fawcett is. Added wikilink for KJ in this section, since FF has one. Italics for program title.
- 17:2217:22, 30 June 2024 diff hist −1 Jaclyn Smith →Early career: Moved content to where it makes sense chronologically.
- 17:2017:20, 30 June 2024 diff hist 0 Jaclyn Smith Moved early-career paragraph to where it belongs.
- 17:1717:17, 30 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Jaclyn Smith →Early life: Fixed italics-span error.
- 00:2700:27, 30 June 2024 diff hist −245 Midnight Cowboy →Production: Went ahead and removed hearsay and weasel words.
29 June 2024
- 23:1323:13, 29 June 2024 diff hist −3 Ben Travers →top: Revised "best remembered" to "most notable." current
25 June 2024
- 23:5023:50, 25 June 2024 diff hist +5 Janet Margolin →Career: Prop assistant, not "girl."
23 June 2024
- 21:1321:13, 23 June 2024 diff hist −108 The Gorilla (play) →Adaptations: Removed hearsay about Kelly's "favorite" performance. current
- 15:3715:37, 23 June 2024 diff hist +14 Osbert Sitwell →Works: Removed another OR assessment, and added two more CN tags. current
- 15:3415:34, 23 June 2024 diff hist +34 Osbert Sitwell →Works: CN tag.
- 15:3315:33, 23 June 2024 diff hist −39 Osbert Sitwell →Works: Removed off-tone language.
22 June 2024
- 22:1722:17, 22 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Uncle Marvel →Fictional character biography: Supplied missing comma. current
21 June 2024
- 22:5322:53, 21 June 2024 diff hist −77 Love for Love →Characters: Revisions to get away from subjective (and sometimes inappropriate) language. current
- 18:0718:07, 21 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Etaoin shrdlu →Media: Removed incorrect comma that made it sound like only 3 pieces total were published in TNY in 1925.
20 June 2024
- 17:3917:39, 20 June 2024 diff hist −23 Anne Randall →Career: Removed off-tone subjective language. current
- 17:3517:35, 20 June 2024 diff hist +4 m Stacey (film) →top: Wikilink.
- 17:3517:35, 20 June 2024 diff hist −289 Stacey (film) Changed irrelevant section title; removed distracting, out of place language and overly tangential assertions.
- 17:2417:24, 20 June 2024 diff hist +17 The Constant Nymph (novel) →Reception and influence: Wikilink for term that might otherwise suggest OR or cause confusion. current
- 15:1315:13, 20 June 2024 diff hist −19 A Thief in Paradise →Plot: Removed redundant phrase. (P.S. This plot description generally feels faintly off-tone in its interweaving of cast information, as though written for a different context.) current
- 15:0015:00, 20 June 2024 diff hist −165 Those Barren Leaves →top: Removed OR. current
- 13:5013:50, 20 June 2024 diff hist +22 Katherine Mansfield Trying to give latter part of article a more logical structure.
- 00:3700:37, 20 June 2024 diff hist −325 Bliss (short story) →top: Removed unnecessary and possibly OR content about the author, who of course has a dedicated article. current
19 June 2024
- 22:3722:37, 19 June 2024 diff hist −4 m The Enchanted April →Plot: Grammar. current
- 22:3622:36, 19 June 2024 diff hist −36 The Enchanted April →top: Revised to remove OR speculation.
- 21:3521:35, 19 June 2024 diff hist +62 Elmer →Given name: Batters. current
18 June 2024
- 19:5419:54, 18 June 2024 diff hist −422 Caesar and Cleopatra (play) →Themes: Took out unsourced, possibly contentious and definitely extraneous Nietzsche angle.
- 19:5119:51, 18 June 2024 diff hist +45 Caesar and Cleopatra (play) →Themes: Section suggests OR.
- 17:4417:44, 18 June 2024 diff hist +4 m The Washington Post →Jeff Bezos era (2013–present): Grammar.
14 June 2024
- 21:0121:01, 14 June 2024 diff hist +108 Elmer Davis →Early life and career: I'll Show You the Town. current
- 19:3519:35, 14 June 2024 diff hist −8 m 1960 Montana gubernatorial election →top: No need for "one and" here with "only."
- 19:3419:34, 14 June 2024 diff hist −8 m Thiruda Thiruda →top: No need for "one and" here with "only."
- 19:3319:33, 14 June 2024 diff hist −8 m Benjamin Franklin →Thirteen Virtues: No need for "one and" with "only" here.
- 18:3918:39, 14 June 2024 diff hist −8 m Sugar Baby Love →top: No need for "one and" here with "only." current
- 18:3718:37, 14 June 2024 diff hist −9 m Betty Boop →Origins: "One and" not needed here with "only." Removed stray comma.
- 18:3418:34, 14 June 2024 diff hist −8 m Thomas Fanara →top: No need for "one and" here with "only."
- 18:1318:13, 14 June 2024 diff hist −7 m 1963 International Gold Cup →top: No need for "one and" here with "only." current
13 June 2024
- 18:1718:17, 13 June 2024 diff hist −415 Alexander Woollcott →Books: Various revisions to remove OR and unsourced discursive detail. current
- 18:1518:15, 13 June 2024 diff hist −640 Alexander Woollcott →Books: Replaced discursive OR paragraph with brief description, and removed more OR from subsequent item.
- 18:1118:11, 13 June 2024 diff hist −2 Alexander Woollcott →Books: Tone; wikilink.
- 11:2711:27, 13 June 2024 diff hist +1 Trocadéro Palace →Controversial museum palace: This is meant to be a past-tense statement, presumably.
